Accepting your comments on these lyrics

[Rose]

this was the title cut off of my CD. People really seem to identify with it. I had quite a few people ask if they could record it but I had promised my cousin that he would be the only one to record it. It became his biggest request wherever he played. He passed away in June of this years from compliations related to diabietes. I need a singer but of course everyone wants to sing their own material and I understand that. I guess I am just trying to get some feedback before I quit trying to write. I surely would appreciate any comments, Negative or Positive. Thank You. Rose Pence